Wow

nicely done

I don't know but it's been said /We're off to war, we're not yet dead /Become a knight and you'll go far /In suspenders and a bra

The 'final war' may be an old idea, but you have re-invented it in this poem and made it your own. Like I told you already, this poem is very deep and Ican really see your growth as a writer.

EB

Awesome! Like all of your other ones this is a very vivid dark piece. I love your writing style it's so unique!