Ooh, that was good. Quite liked it really.

Make a good rock song. If Creed was still together, you could sell it to them. Bundles o' cash, y'know. But alas! they are no longer.

But you still are, and I am glad.

I love the rhyme scheme. It works really great with this. My favorite part is the last two lines, because they have a ring to them. Great job!

great poem. i really liked the imagery and in a way i can really relate to this poem. it was beautiful.

I loved that first line; such a powerful opener. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.