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| xXMissyxX 2008-01-15 ch 5,  | abuseI love this! And I think it was evil for you to stop the chapter here and leave a cliffy! Josh sounds ubber cute and Trixa sounds ubber delicious! Silver sounds sweet and Almara sounds lyk my best friend! All in all I love it. I have 2 get off in 3 minutes so Good night and Update son! ^_^ |
| Chloe Caralee 2007-07-25 ch 5, | abuseYou should def. put some mermaids in the story soon ^.^ Please update I realli, realli like this story so far! |
| Mad! 2006-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseArgh! whats she going to say!?!?! |
| xanthofile 2006-02-04 ch 4, | abuseYou’re defiantly coming to the wedding, right? defiantly coming to a wedding? i know what you meant by that, but still, when i read that, i nearly died laughing. *so sorry* eh, ok, i couldn't resist pointing that out. on with the show! |
| gnashing_teeth 2006-02-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseits great i cant wait to read the next chapter your characters are all lovable specially josh good work |
| NubianQueen413 2006-02-02 ch 5, | abuseOH MY GOSH! This story kicks **! adn you so have to update...or die! gr lol |
| Mage Dudette 2006-01-09 ch 5, | abuselol, i love krissi and sass! ^_^ and cute chapter. even with the cliffie *pout* |
| The Little Neko Nya 2006-01-08 ch 5, | abuseI'll review!! I was gonna anyway, but the whole yaoi things helps. ^-^ Um...should I be worried? It doesn't matter if I should be, I am. I hope nothing bad happens...you won't make them break up, right? RIGHT?! |
| ra-miew 2006-01-08 ch 5, anon. | abuse*growls* Hey that chapter was to short! *pouts* And such an evil cliffhanger too! Okay, well at least it wasn't veery evil, like umm... Like killing off one of your characters when you're only in chapter five and ending the chapter with: The End... That'd be pretty lame and cruel XD Heheheh, so Silver and Josh are boyfriends now? Cute! ^__^ |
| ra-miew 2006-01-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseooh, I like this story :D I especially like Silver ^^ He's a cute centaur! That, and now I can tell my friend Silver that I now picture him as a blue centaur whose jeiu XD Heheheheh, the wonders of annoying your friends ^^ |
| The Little Neko Nya 2006-01-04 ch 4, | abuse...Omigod...I am completely in love with this story. The world, the characters, just...everything! *squeals* I hope you keep this story going! I love it. |
| s... 2006-01-03 ch 4, anon. | abusewow. that was different...and i LIKe it. ME LIKY LOT. i may not agree with the clothing style but its a diff. world and the colors are sexy. What is Josh going to do now...he needs to find a job and he hasn't had cleaned or anything to pay for his free room...you did mention something about cooking. would it be interesting if his style of food was considered exotic and popular... well i have to go...you do need to do spell check or just reread...there are some missing words and some mispelled. |