wow! this was dark, and deep. i like this one very much... kario

You've managed to make a poem with such a depressing subject come out beautiful, which is definately saying a lot for the subject. You have a way with using the right words and our wonderful with imagery. Great Job.

i understand the titel, duh, but it seemed after...boring, for lack of a better term, in comparison with the poem, whihc was very good. great work

huh, i got with someone at newyear - scarily similar. i like this, its very poetic (well duh..) hope u know what i mean.

Han.

Hey ya alex! This is so beautiful, it really gave me sort of a sad feeling inside. Which isnt a bad thing or anything, but yeah. Very cooL poem, loved the last stanza and we'll talk soon!

Much love, Rosanna.

Sounds creepy, scary and out of comtrol. It was very well written and described though. Email me if you want to talk. \

Keep it up.

Wow, just wow, this is so powerful and creepy but in a good way, excellent piece

I don't have much to say for this poem nice job :)

Wow that was really great! The guy not so great...but i really liked this and thanks for the reviews.

That was really good. I loved how the poem flowed and it wasn't choppy at all. Maybe you could read some of my poetry? I need to get it off my other computer, but I do have an unfinished story up that you could check out. . Again, even though I don't comment often I read your poetry everytime a mew peom comes out!

something sweet yet tragic about this...the rythm though is definite, and its very beautiful...nice job!

Hey! It's been ages and ages and ages and ages! Hope you had good holidays, and a happy new year to ya. This is stunning, so sharp with bright emotion and surprising lines.

this was really good. loved the last stanza.

Sad but wonderful piece. I love the countdown at the end. Well done. :)

Wow, not the best way to begin the new year is it? This guy really sounds like a real jerk. I hope the new year gets better for you! keep your head held high, cause you've got the talent!