Intresting how you charcterize a human's wants and needs being taken from them. I enjoyed this poem a lot.

-bunnyrabbit228

Johnny! Now she'll die of dehydration... how could you?

onto a more serious note~

this was good... I like the whole idea of Holy water, and "She's doomed to yearn for what she lacks."

"She pours holy water into her fragile glass, but there is a crack, and the water flows fast. She wants it back..."

that's my favorite part.

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.

I like this.

I like how you cleverly put the line in "As sweet as salt." Well done, I enjoyed reading this.