i love this. i really, really do. this is so vivid & grotesque & beautiful & so many other adjectives i can't think of. it's almost kind of tragic, in a way. nostalgic.

well, well done. :)

Catherine

Beautiful. It seems like the girl is so wonderful and glittery at first, but she's breaking down on the inside. It maintains a dreamy yet heartbreaking feel to it.

the ending was absolutely brilliant.

it had a certain rhythm to it. a sad jazzy feeling.

just loved it to pieces

oh wow

this poem reminds me of a friend of mine,

really hit the spot

if 50% of what you wrote is taken as a metaphor

one of my favs for sure!

very vivid imagery, this is a really beautiful poem.

very good. i'm sorry i can't get to more of your writing right now, but this is excellent!

-sunshine

Favorite line: "at the sins trailing your stiletto." My God, I don't even know what to say about this poem. It's wonderful. I love it. Keep writing! :)

Very vivid images painted beautifully.

Hi! I really like your poetry, especially under 'pink dandy lion'. Good work! I love the way the words just come together in this poem, it's like looking at the best painting in the world. A true artist makes it look easy and effortless, and you've captured that. None of the words are forced, and it flows like a stream winding through the endless forest of time. An excellent write!

Thanks bunches for the review! I try to be different. ) Actually, no, it's just the way I am. Thanks again for the lovely compliments, and the addition of me to your favs list(s).

May inspiration never leave you wanting!

all my love,felicia

Wow, so sad, and so beautifully written. I feel like I knew her after reading this, great job.

Really good well written, I like all the emotion and meaning

i love this...its definitly going on my favourites list... I love the great use of emotion and i love the way you paint my imagination with your words...i was captured and taken in hook line and sinker..im a sucker for pieces like this! great great work...as always!

Button Nose x x

ow. this hurts and shows so much insight and and... sigh. it's so hard when broken people can't fix themselves and we've got to see the struggle and a million other shadows and god i remember days like that. sorry for the runon babble :)completely digs into my heart.

mezzie

Oh my fucking god.

This is amazing. Favorites list.

I tried to copy and paste my favorite lines but I'd highlighted the entire page. Every single line gave me the shivers. Wow, this is just so cleverly done.

You're incredibly talented. Keep writing.

wow...that was so intricate and beautiful. the buildup was amazing. truly loved it.