again an interesting concept that I think you could toy with a little and make it a little better but the overal principle of the poem is wonderfully done.

Wow. That was very descriptive in a way that shyed off to describe shamfaced.

This has something special about it.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

Excellent poem! It was a lovely read; well done.

creepy and sad. I loved the flow, it was very emotional, thumpety thump like a heartbeat.