Oh the last verse is PERFECT, but I don't quite like this as a whole as much as the two other poems I've read...they were far more elaborate, this is shorter and the meaning less complex...but I'm in love with that last verse...great one! Love, Mia

this is beautiful.

I love the beginning and the ending. The first three lines are so sweet. The last line is so gorgeous. I (am in) love (with) it.

completely head over heels with those last two lines.

Capitilazation would be nice. But other than that, it was good.