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Reviews For: All is what it should be
Herminia
2006-01-07
ch 1, 		abuseWonderful job. I like the first line, "thick blood". Very descriptive. Kudos.
Faithless Juliet
2006-01-03
ch 1, 		abuseDark, I like the use of colors though. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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