it feels like an adventure.

THis was really kind of cool. I personally think that it would flow better if you split the paragraphs(or not, if it is suposed to be a chain of duads) and perhaps cleaned up the meter a bit. the cadence seems to change from line to line. Otherwise it is a wonderful poem. I do really like the Sleeping Beauty theme, with one hiding, asleep, and the other searching for them. Keep up the good work. ;-)

I'll find you.

That is a catchy one. I've always wanted to go to Japan, but I really like how your rhymn scheme worked into the poem. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.

Hm... It's interesting. It reminds me of a sphinx's riddle. It's very good, but the repetition gets a bit irritating after a while.