I am really looking forward for the next chapter. The characters are very real, and the story is very compelling!

This chapter doesn't seem that ordinary to me, but maybe that's because I'm painfully boring. I thought that Lucas's(that's his name right) emotions were expressed clearly in this and it sort of gave me an idea of his relationship with the groom and why he wasn't happy even though he was best man.

Looking forward to the next part. I do wonder if it's going to be the fated meeting =).

Woah meeting happening sooner than Wedding! This is gonna b GOD! Hurry up with part 2!!

Aww, I love this story. I remember reading it when there were only a couple chapters and then forgetting to fav it, and now rediscovering it when the last chapter came out. It's a great story, and I want things to go well for Lucas. Fynn seems like such a confused guy. Oi, drama abounds. Can't wait to see what happens.

Honest to god, my heart skipped a beat when I got my email saying this had been updated. I love this story, really I do, if it where a book my copy would be yellowing and taped back together because of the number of times I have re read it. Favorite quotes would be underlined, page numbers noted, though it would be unsecured because I know them all, and they pop in to my head and move me as much as they did first time round. What I'm really trying to say, (in a very round about way because I just did an exercise for my prose class and I cant get out of hat mind set) is you are an amazing writer, and if it takes you 10 years to complete this, I'll be eagerly awaiting every update till the end.

OMG an update! This was pretty amazing! Awesome work!

I was so happy to see an update. I love this story! The chapter was great and I can't wait for more! Have fun on holiday!

I cannot wait for Fynn and Lucas to meet again, its what I have been waiting for since the 1st sentence lol thank you!

ha. microshit!
i'm so glad you updated, i love this story :D

I'm loving this! Hope you're still working on it :)

Great story! I hope you update soon! I like it alot and cant wait to see what happens next... I mean the meeting is INEVITABLE now... maybe at the wedding?

Interesting story!

This is heartbreaking. =(

The last sentence of the flashback was really powerful, I liked it.

Nice job!