Wow, this...this is just cool, I have to say.

yay! glad you finished this. it's uber nice c:

kinda reminded me of the song Yesterday's Feelings by The Used. you should seriously check it out & try to develop this poem more. neway, thanks for the review. 'contact' was my very first haiku & i really appreciate it that you like it c:

I see this piece as the basis from which you could develop the idea stated in ur title. Even though it does have strength as it is, I believe developing the idea would only stregthen it...And I´m not korean... I live in Brasil and study in an international school, so I have many korean friends, and they tauht me how to write it...Good piece!-Marioh

hey, can I have a more explanatory version of this poem?