This is so pretty. I can't even describe the sadness it's made me felt. I love your style very much.

So beautiful.

wow...i love the great imagery you have put into this...and the tone is really nice...you used the celestials really well...although i find quite a distant relationship between the third stanza and the first two...still, you did a good job...

truly yours...

Yet another awesome work here...I dunno your words jus work for me. *shrug* it's really good. I loved the first line. It really drew me in b/c it was original. Keep it up.

fantastic...absolutely fantastic!

I love this, the imagery is just perfection.

oh wow, this is so pretty. the imagery is beautiful, so is the whole thing. Love the way its written. Nice work!

wow amazing imagery. this was beautiful and very well written. the last line is my favourite. lovely.

Excellent use of imagery. The light easy flow of this brings out a wonderful scene. Good write.

i loved the last line, this was beautiful. great imagery.

love the last stanza.

Interesting work. I love using celestial beings in poems, I draw inspiration from the stars quite a bit too.

that last line got me! this is really good! :)

'The moon was shy'. That's such a sweet phrase. This whole poem screams ghost of the past.

this is so beautiful... *sighs* gorgeous work. it has a real dream-like quality. nice! i think i'll add it...