Haunting, Faylin. A very emotional piece, something that still makes me want to cry when I read it. You manipulate your readers.

Is this the last chapter...? if so, i applaude your work as a fictional author.

I meant to review each chapter, but got caught up in the storytelling.

This - is - so - powerful. The fallen angel here is portrayed with such humanity, such pain during his torture. He is humbled, humiliated, and desperate. You push this urgency, this trapped feeling along, until you have us caught by the need to escape. There's a kind of bitter relief when he finally dies.

You manipulate the reader perfectly. Well done.

Dark, cruel, a nightmare woven with words.And you do it oh so well.

There are a few technical errors - apostrophes, capitalization - but I'm so caught by the story I'm not even going to complain about them individually.

Woah, a little vivid. It's a pretty intense subject. Not too sure what I think of it, the subject I mean. The writing was very good, vivid like I said before. Freaked me out a little.