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| It Sounds Horrible 2006-01-13 ch 1,  | abuseWow so at least something good came out of reading mythology. You are really good at endings. |
| Arichos 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseHey, first time reading one of your poems...you sort of keep a broken path of words, but you manage to keep it together somehow...its pretty good, i like it. Title didn't really connect to this poem, but hell, what do i know? |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThe short lines really help the flow because they seem to stab at the reader in quick bursts. Lines like, "My writings are shillings,-To sea bearing lovers", really capture the imagination and mysticism that is embedded throughout. Wonderful work. |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abuseHm, I like this. The imagery is great and it really conveys the emotions well. |
| mercury.love 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of winter. A cold winter where it doesn't snow, it's only freezing and you shiver and write. Or... the winter I'm currently living through. Lovely and cutting. I like. |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI. Love. This. ♥ (heart you till you sufficate) 'nough said. :) ~* noelle |
| lackluster 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusemy dear, you have captured the beauty of nature. especially in that first stanza. it's breathtaking. |
| Seraph Strike 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, rhythmic, I loved this poem. Nothing to constructively critique! :D |
| she's not breathing 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseif this is what comes out of that, keep doing it. an absolutely amazing piece of work with everything from tone to imagery to, of course, allusion. your work is set apart on this site by the sheer scope of it, & also the way you don't write simple angst or emotion. i'm still in awe. ~k8 |
| in theory 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseBut the wind will,Not cease,To remember how,To blow. This to me is a poem in itself, it's so endlessly perplexing. I like the overall subject of this piece, but it's the discreet, choicy meanings that are anyone's for the picking that really make your work more appealing than others. |
| thursdays and rain 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abusehaunting.. i love the last line ♥ |