ah interestinggosh its horrible and gory

i love it.

oh its horribleand goodclever, clever

but i figured out what made me think it was a girluhm, the hair partmousy hair or something

hawhaw.parking lot and truck.such simple words to me though

American-English can be dull though, but then again i guess its the way you put it.yeah, i immediently thought girl by the way, i guess its just the way he/she acted

ah, interesting.revelrousers. oh hoe.

can you daydream at night.friggen brilliant that is.

ah, interesting.espinogue. slaughtered the word.intruiging..

OMG. I would really like to know what happens next.I'm guessing it is a guy, but I wasn't too sure. I first thought it was a girl, but...Please continue.Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow

Sorry that I didn't review the first chapter, but it was intriguing.Thanks for reviewing 'Look!' for me. I am thinking of making a second chapter, but is not sure.I'm gonna amke this short than because I wanna read the rest now. Thanks!Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow

whum...wow...and mind you, your...erm...american? is very good...Better than most poeple I know...*mumbles under breath* lol!

Anyways, awesome...and yeah, I'm not really supose to be reading M rated things when I'm 12, but HEY!

I really do like it thu=ough...interesting.

~TaintedBlackTears

Its really riveting. You have to write more, some form of closure is more than necessary, good job!

wtf did you actually go through this kind of experience? cuz you write like its personal experience. is it?cuz if its not, you should friggin write a book. goodness. quit fictionpress and write a book.in other words, awesome. ;D

You really need to keep going on this one. I love this story. At first you sorta left the readers in a position that made you think that the character is going to run away then this twist. Really good. Keep going.

heythis is really good. keep up the good work girl

Hey,This is really good. I hope that you keep going I want to know what is going to happen to her. The way that it is heading with clues like her bottling it up it seems like she is going to get into a fight. Hurry with chap three please.dragonwarrior

although i would wish for more dialouge it was nicely written. keep it up!