a ticket to hell?
i like the last line, it was cute and creative.

really really good

very real, very original. enjoyable!

Wow. Do u honestly kno how true this is?? guys have 2 much pride 4 their own good(i do 2 but i cant drive yet, so ha). emo boys dont crash cuz their drunk. the kill themselves.

My god. i feel so mean rite now just sayin tht. it wasnt like tht whn i thought it.

Heya, I was wondering if you ever read the novel "The long walk" by Stephen King? He uses "the ticket" as a means of saving a person died

the last line is so fantasticly perfect it kills me. :) seriously, that line made this poem for me and continuely does each time I read. I love this, I love this; just so pretty.

~* noelle

Short but good.

so real. i love it. : )

Haha this is so ungeneralisable but such a surprisingly obvious noncliche. I love that. And that last line is fabulously realistic.