Wow. I like how you separted the five senses... amazing... and your tone is absolutely awesome... keep it up!

Omg, I want to cry. THis is the best piece I've read in a while. Wow._SudonaSunrise_

Really sweet, really pretty, good job

I will repeat what I said over on PBO...This is a great evocative short on how to explain a sense.

I loved the imagery and the feelings it evoked.

The last line "I hear you" clearly expresses how the friend got through to to her friend.

Amazing! Very well done!

Darwin

beautiful piece, interesting question. Really lovely, fantastic last line.

very,very well written. quite beautiful i might saY!