beautifully done

Wow. So simple and descriptive. I love how you wrote this. Great use of verbs.

Very lovely language. You start most of your lines with verbs of movement! I don't know if it was on purpose, but I think it really works. Actually, if you were to rewrite this, it's be cool if you started EVERY line with a verb of motion. The title of this poem is also very good.

"Hit hard like the hurricane / Slid soft like the sand." Nice lines, there.

Your rhyme scheme is good, but you should work on your meter. Seriously, this poem could be fantastic.