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| It Sounds Horrible 2006-02-28 ch 1,  | abuseOverall this is great. You're a very good writer. I just love the words in parantheses (please excuse me for any wrong spellings). |
| LunarGuardianPhoenix 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOH WOW I LOVE IT!KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
| Thareth 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abusei like |
| Buritani89 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseHey girl thanks for all the reviews this is one of your poems that first caught my eye. Thanks for the compliments and keep up the good work. |
| crazy dog events 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuse"You used to be alive, but now you're just a puddle" Simple line, but really wonderful. You've got some amazing one-liners here. Great Job! -pictographic.love |
| Nicole Michele 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like the pain in this emotion with-out using any openly painful words..(heartbreak) for example! You have talentKeep writing |
| NO LONGER USING 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abusethis is really good, hey you changed your name...i like it it sounds cool and unique...this poem is really good again...also i wrote another fic Superficially HOnest , if you haven't already check it out... |
| Calliope Veronica 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like the line: "But I'll stay the same forever (I'm stuck the way you loved me)..." That's great! ^_^ .:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:. |
| Luthiena o Lorien 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseBreathtaking.I love the use of parenthesis.: DKeep writing! |
| Lady Glass 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautiful, I love what you're doing with your newest poetry what with the parentheses and all, it's great!! Much love, Lady Glass |
| fairEtales 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abusewow. depressing...but that's you. Great job hun! I always love the way that you put stuff in parenthases. CANT WAIT TO READ a little too much 4th chap (i got in trouble so i couldnt play on the compuer |
| burning kisses 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusethis is so sad. eww "flesh can melt." thats disturbing but leaves an effect on people. i think ive read it in class before. |
| Jezsh 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abusesweet, restless and painful. I love the images you've created...the stretched time, endless. |
| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThe last line was very good. I felt like the entire poem was driving towards that last line. Honestly, the rest of the poem was pretty good, but not as good as the last line. My God, I'm redundant. I'll shut up now. Nice title. And last line. Oh, yeah, and I like the last line. (Okay, bye!) |