haha, it's me again, so soon, too. 20 yen is $20. One yen, one cent...kinda sad. I was only 78% sure it was true, so I checked... I'm not trying to offend you or anything if that's what you're thinking, cuz I sometimes don't know things like this either, so offending you would be like offending myself (I don't mean that in a bad way). Anyways, this was suppose to be a review, right? (I write TOO much...) It was a great second chapter, honestly, 100%, no lies.

YAY! This is one of the best story ever, even though it's just beginning (I know there's more chapters, but hey, I'm reviewing on the first chapter). I hope you do well in later chapters!And update whenever you want, don't have someone telling you when to...

DarkFox: Update soon X3

DarkFox: Hm? But I thought the swin-suit Hikari chose was an orange bikini? not a one piece... -shrugs- Oh and what about the guys? Don't they need swin trunks?

Shadow Wolf: Full of questions aren't we?

DarkFox: -sticks out tongue-

DarkFox: Phew! I'm glad Water didn't take the chocolates from Hikari, but I'm also glad that blonde haired dud is gonna (maybe)be her guardian X3 T.T If anyone tries to break up Water & Yumi (though they're technically not together... yet X3) I'll have to hurt them -glare-

Shadow Wolf: -sweatdrops- she doesn't like it when the main couple get's broken up or interfiered with... it drives her up the wall

DarkFox: Darn right it does! (great so far! X3

DarkFox: -ears perk up- Fox Love hm? I may have to check that one out too X3

DarkFox: AW! That's so sweet! XD

DarkFox: Mr... Water kissed Yumi! -nuzzles Shadow-

Shadow Wolf: -slightly blushes then whispers in Dark's ear about the date-

DarkFox: What! -reads more- phew... all she can think about is wa- Nice as? You nasty little perv Shinji! -tries to pumble Shinji but is held back by Shadow- And what the Hel do you mean nail her?1 -snarls-

Shadow Wolf: she's with Water now!

DarkFox: I don't care! I'll kil that little perv! (Shinji)

Shadow Wolf: -sweatdrops-

DarkFox: Nya! It's driving meh crazy! Who's the guy that was reading the newspaper? O.O

DarkFox: Will Water ever be able to call her Yumi? Or at least Master Yumi? -sigh- just curious...

Shadow Wolf:She's the one reading this, not me...

DarkFox: Don't be rude! -smacks Shadow- Humph, great so far X3

Shadow Wolf: ...

Not much use for this chapter, though it was a good introduction to the new spirit and a development in the relationship between Water and Yumi. I think the next chapter will be a bit more interesting.

YAY! UPDATE AGAIN! SON!

this chapter was fricking awesome! loved it! update when ya can!

Hey, updates are updates. Nothing to worry about!

o.o...-_-'...o.0'... -...*-*... YAY! YAY! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! ::Runs around the libary sreaming "THE STORY'S UPDATED!:: I'm so happy! Now when's the next time that you're gonna update? Lol. Anyways, awsome chapter and can't wait till you update again... which will probably be next year... ::Puppy eyes:: Don't make me wait that long again please. Stop this torturing, it''s killing me! Lol. Why does it take you so long to update anyways? Anyways, just update soon. )

-DemonicDestiny-