Nope, it was great! I really liked it! Especially since there is a hint of a type relationship btwn Yuni and Water, I think. But it's so awesome! *dreamy eyed* *jumps up and down* Write more! Write more! Please!

Rae_V

Awesome! I really like your story! Please write more.

It's good! I like it a lot!

I really like this story. It is very well done. I'm extremely impressed.

Good chapterKeep it up

Another great story dude, and a bit funnier than your others. cant wait to see the next chapters! sorry but i dont have an idea for a name.

I really like the story so far so keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good writing!

Hey! I am so glad you enjoyed the name thinga ma gig. And that's cool if you don't want to put a romance b/w them, it does seem like the obvious one! i loved this chap, just like the last one! keep up the good work

Hey, This is great! I love it and you REALLY have to update soon! PLZ? Oh and is the romance gonna be b/w water and yumi? If so a possible name could be uh, Heart of Water, or maybe, Guardian's Stone, or something of that nature. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

That chapter was good! especially the ending. :3

this story looks really cute, I will try to keep reading...But i dont have a title.