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| Reviews for Pierced |
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   R. Ficst 10/25/12 . chapter 42Wonderful! Really great work! I thoroughly enjoyed your characters and wonderful storytelling. Can't wait for the sequel! |
| caitly 10/10/12 . chapter 42 I really like this story! I love how you portrayed the Greek Gods, but sort of gave them your own twist. And Bri is really awesome, too. One thing though that I think would really help though is if you read through it again and cleaned up some of the typos and grammatical errors or if you got a beta to help. Your plot is awesome, and I think if it was cleaned up it would flow even better. I can't remember what chapter it was in to go back and quote it, but I loved when Ares said something along the lines that people should adore not love because then you want to do what is best for them. I love that so so much! |
| juju 8/31/12 . chapter 42 I'm super excited to see the continuation! This was literally the best story I've ever read about Cupid. besides, he is the only personajem mythology that attracts me. I hope the sequel, great story! |
| IHeartWritingSoThere 8/26/12 . chapter 2 So awesome! Keep writing and being amazing :) |
| Failisse 6/3/12 . chapter 42 What a wonderful story! I love how you combined modern day romance with mythology. I've always loved the story of Eros and Psyche, and I think your fic is an interesting spin off of what might have taken place had Psyche and Eros not gotten together. This was a well thought out story and I enjoyed every bit of it. I hope that the next mythology story you write will be a whole other tale of a romance between a human and Hades (because for some reason I've always liked romance with Death as a character). Hope to read more fics like yours! - Failisse |
| jnl94 5/16/12 . chapter 26 Well at least she took him with her. He totally deserved it. |
| jnl94 5/16/12 . chapter 25 Aw Cupid called her beautiful because he loves her |
| jnl94 5/16/12 . chapter 24 Aw Bri don't go! |
| jnl94 5/16/12 . chapter 23 NO. Cupid will come back dang it |
| jnl94 5/16/12 . chapter 22 Okay ew. Ares is a sick freak |
| jnl94 5/12/12 . chapter 21 No no no no no no! Don't do it Bri! You should be with Cupid not JAy! Stupid girl! |
| jnl94 5/12/12 . chapter 20 YAY! They kissed! It was so cute and then he went and ruined it. -sigh- Guys can be such idiots. Even demigods. |
| jnl94 5/12/12 . chapter 19 Seriously? If the guy can't even remember her name, he's not worth it. So what if he's cute and whatever, she can't remember her name. Cupid is WAY better. |
| jnl94 5/12/12 . chapter 18 Man, can someone just punch that tramp in the face? She is seriously getting on my last good nerve! |
| jnl94 5/12/12 . chapter 17 I was just thinking they could challenge Ares to something and win. Maybe something that Ares doesn't really know much about, but since he hates to lose he would agree anyway and if he won, he continued doing what he's doing, but if he lost he would leave her and Cupid alone! |
