-cue cheesy dun dun dun- Loved it! I'm going to go read the sequel=]

Moroccan is not a language. They speak Arabic.
But enjoying the story so far.

:D YAY! TEEHEE do ou think sequel?

I loved it :)

I love you for creating this story...I must admit I was hesitant when it came to my choice of reading it or not...since Im so damn picky...It really hard for me to find a story that draws me in...and you managed to do that. I commend you. The plot was brilliant! I wont comment on the typos because I see many already have but I want you to know that itll be a lot easier to read if you corrected them...Anywho...I know Im probably weird for saying this but, I absolutely loved Ares...I always fall for the bad guys and he was perfect lol...Great Job!

-Caya

lol Ok I had to stop midstory and say this..."We're freaking mortals!!"

That was absolutely awesome!

-Caya

Okay, so I pretty much just sat and read through this entire story in one afternoon. Granted, it is summertime and I don't neccessarily have a lot on my plate at the moment, but still: BRavo.
No really though, it was a good and captivating story. You managed to hold my attention for quite some time. A feat, I assure you.
Anyway, if you would do a thorough spell check and go and fix all the odd (and very hard to read) mistakes/misspells..whatever you want to call them, they're distracting and actually unfortunately take away from the story at parts. I literally lost interest reading quite a few times because I could figure out what you were trying to say.
Oh and, are you aware that at one point you even call Jason "Kevin"? I mean, that's not even a misspell, that's a whole new name...

Any

LOVED IT!Though the ending left things unsaid. Does that mean theres going to be a sequal? Because if it does then I'll be very happy!Anyway, very well written, it seems like something that could very well be published, so keep up the good work and keep the stories a comming!

so i pulled an allnighter to read this... OMG you should get it published aside from typing errors here and there, the storywas amazing...! on to the sequel!

man, i really love your stories. Their amazing and fantastic, but somehow still manage to be realistic!!

Loved it

Persephone was not a goddess. Also u keep mixing the roman and Greek gods so I'll list them below.same but different names 4 different cultures.
Greek Roman
Zeus Iuppiter King of gods and humans
Hestia Vesta goddess of sacred flame
Artemis Diana goddess of the moon & hunting
Demeter Ceres goddess of agriculture
Ares Mars god of war
Apollo Apollo god of sun, archery, music,&meds
Poseidon Neptunus god of the sea
Hermes Mercurius messenger god
Hephaistos Volanus god of metal working
Aphrodite Venus goddess of love& beauty
Athena Minerva goddess of war,weaving,& wisdom
Hera Iuno queen of gods and humans
Hades Pluto king of the underworld

There is no J in Latin which is what the ancient Romans spoke so the substituted it with I. I don't Know much about cupid.

This would be a truly awesome story if it weren't for the numerous spelling and grammatical errors in every chapter. Some were simple typos and others were blatant errors. If this was edited it would be a very formidable piece. Unfortunately, the errors detracted from the story. Good luck in future endeavors.

this was a satisfying story.
the only thing i have to comment on: i heard a different version of the story about psyche and cupid. you've probably gotten comments about this as well. but in this version, psyche's sisters convince her that cupid might be a monster and therefore looks at his face under candlelight and sees that it's not a monster. if possible, send me a link to the one you read =] it also seems like an interesting story. thanks for writing ^^

Can't wait to read your sequel. THis was a great story, I simply loved it.