wow, you had about a million different story tales with each word! all these different refrences to a history that we have never heard of! amazing! very well written.

p.s. thank you so much for your sweet review! i love mountains too!

Nice! Really, good job! Creepy! I like the brown hair-thcik beard, adds to the whole mysterious atmosphere!Keep up ^^Gotta go study now :(Well done, see ya!

Ah, I managed to get the review-thingy to open... the server was apparently overloaded minutes ago ^_0'Hm, earlier this day you told me you were quite pleased with this... well you had all reason to be pleased! I like it very much. I can easily imagine the person her feelings (strange, I know)Anyway... You know a man (I suppose it is a man since he has a beard ^_~) with grey eyes and brown hair? Just curious you know.It is short but REALLY splendid! (Go YOU! ^_^)

Lhune

This was quite sad. It had an element of mystery since you used quite a lot of just one/two word sentences, but I love it all the same. Good job, and the ending was quite unpredictable, which was good.