Hey, this is a very cool poem! It's very blunt, honest in an almost cruel way. I've been in your shoes before and know what this feels like too - it's like you're a fly on the wall. SUCKS. But yes, you should always follow your heart. Sometimes thinking gets in the way of things.

dude she doesn't deserve you! loved the flow of the poem - it's slow, pondering opening, that is heartfelt in it's inner turmoil, but then the tempo changes with the tone. tis poignant and effective.

I like this poem, it stands up for geeks everywhere! Very good, it conveyed the emotion of the narrator well.