I like it. It's really awesome. I hope you are continueing it. It's sad. And kind of morbid. But so is life. ha.

I like the fact that this isn't so cliché. It's not your usual story about a girl who THINKS she has problems, but it's all in her head and then she falls in love with the hottest boy because as it turns out, she's the hottest girl and she didn't know it. No, this story has REAL drama and REAL problems. I like when authors write about the "forgotten characters" or characters on the side line that no one usually pays attention to unless if they're mad fun of. Keep it up ^_^

What a great start! I'm already loving it ^_^

i really like this story. i mean, i know it's depressing subject matter, but i like the way you write. the characters are cool, i hope you up date soon.

now i must go read the other stuff you've written.

peace.

dis gurl is a pure natural...u actually feel wha 's happenina nice story n way to go kay, one day i promise u r gonna be a successful writerAniket

Graet chappie Loved it! Update soon please

Great chapter keep it up

First off, I completely disagree with the reviewer 'Charles' and I think it's pretty ridiculous to label a story something that it's not within it's first chapter. I didn't even think of emo/goth when I read it. And there's no need to leave a review like that. But anyway, I liked this chapter :)! I thought it was short though, but that's alright. I'll live. It made me laugh when Nariko got bumped into and yelled what she did. Looks like she has a strong personality. Keep up the good work and update soon!

lol...I'm glad it brightened your day, maybe this will do the same! And I don't think this is just an emo/goth story like OTHER reviewers...Cough...Cough...But we're all entitled to our beliefs, I suppose...Anyway, great chapter!

Can we say good detail? I loved the first chapter. It was so emotional and realistic that it was just amazing and I was shocked when I reached the bottom and there was no other chapter! Writers block? Hope not, because I want to read on and see what happens with Davis the jackass! I can't believe he did that. And just to think that people are really like that in the world. UPDATE SOON whenever you can! And thanks for reviewing my story :)

CK

update?

God...this just rips your heart out right into your gut. Beautiful words...and such horrifying emotions they have me hooked onto this story.

Hey, KC! Remember me? It's Punk'd!

Joe: Hi KC! We're back!

And babes, I have no problem with you liking a girl. I'm bisexual...anyone who has a problem with you loving someone can just go and shove their ideas where the sun don't shine.

Talk to me sweetheart!

This was weird...And oddly depressing, but I liked it anyway! Your description was excellent.

Great. Another Emo/Goth fic. Come back when you actually write something original.