Short and effective. Well done! Keep writing! _

Anna

wow... this fits me to a friggen T... nice job

Jordyn...I'm sorry you feel this way...man you need to get on so we can talk...about what I don't know...but lol...once again really sorry you feel this way...

-Jeff

i know exactly how this feels... it's amazing how everybody feels the same things...and at the same time thinks they're the only ones...great poem. one thing, you say 'no tears', but then you say 'to cry where no one can hear me'. it seems like that incongruent, but maybe it's just my perception *shrug*