You have a seriously kik way with words. They just flow ontot he paper and I love it. the rhythm was amazing and the poem so true. Brilliant if I do say so myself.

but soon or later...sooner

I like this... I can relate the beginning is nice and well written

Wow, I love the way that you wrote this. It was so honest and you could see right where you were coming from in this. Beautifully done, I love this.

Keep it up.

Wow this is a really sad emotion piece. Makes the reader feel almost guilty and out of touch. But i liked it.

'Cracks in truth', thats an original way to put it. I can relate to certain emotions seeming to have no name. "but you still lied

and truth be told

i don't know if you know

what is true since you lost the truth in you" harsh, and powerful. I like the way you put it.~TRW

Wow, i saw so much of me in this and it amazed me. The words were cutting and to the bone (in a good way) well done, i just think a bit of punctuation would have gave it an even better impact!

Lots of love~AC~

this poem is great...the rhyme scheme works well with your emotion. i especially like the last 7 lines. very great :]

wow! dark and deep ending...but i do like this!

oo nice ending, giood job

i really like this poem, i loved the lines "you made me forget

how it feels to be small

to be nothing at all"very weel written, simple and powerful!