|Reviews for Cracks in Truth|
| Out-Of-Reality 2/6/06 . chapter 1
You have a seriously kik way with words. They just flow ontot he paper and I love it. the rhythm was amazing and the poem so true. Brilliant if I do say so myself.
| simpleplan13 2/4/06 . chapter 1
but soon or later...sooner
I like this... I can relate the beginning is nice and well written
| Moon-Chaser 1/10/06 . chapter 1
Wow, I love the way that you wrote this. It was so honest and you could see right where you were coming from in this. Beautifully done, I love this.
Keep it up.
| Candyluv18 1/6/06 . chapter 1
Wow this is a really sad emotion piece. Makes the reader feel almost guilty and out of touch. But i liked it.
| The Random Witness 1/6/06 . chapter 1
'Cracks in truth', thats an original way to put it. I can relate to certain emotions seeming to have no name. "but you still lied
and truth be told
i don't know if you know
what is true since you lost the truth in you" harsh, and powerful. I like the way you put
| AllyCred 1/5/06 . chapter 1
Wow, i saw so much of me in this and it amazed me. The words were cutting and to the bone (in a good way) well done, i just think a bit of punctuation would have gave it an even better impact!
Lots of loveAC
| marie alexandria 1/5/06 . chapter 1
this poem is great...the rhyme scheme works well with your emotion. i especially like the last 7 lines. very great :]
| lilyqueen777 1/5/06 . chapter 1
wow! dark and deep ending...but i do like this!
| RedXfire 1/5/06 . chapter 1
oo nice ending, giood job
| Sunflower dream 1/5/06 . chapter 1
i really like this poem, i loved the lines "you made me forget
how it feels to be small
to be nothing at all"very weel written, simple and powerful!