Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: You
The Postscript 2006-01-13 . chapter 1
I like this, especially the part about the 'pretty plastic girl'. While I look all around me and see their love, I do feel that emptiness that someone does not feel that way about me...but then I am also glad, for if it means to win love I have to become so bland...so plastic, then I would much rather wait and be myself. Excellent write. Keep it up.
blackoutroses 2006-01-05 . chapter 1
i don't know where to being-your words hold vulnerability and truth. having single words on lines, really suspended the moment.well written!
lilyqueen777 2006-01-05 . chapter 1
wow...i bet everyone can relate to this. i certainly do...still trying to get over my last boyfriend...it's kinda tough!
Return to Top