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hime1221 2007-07-23 . chapter 1
Oh, my gosh. it was so wonderful...so insightful. You are an amazing writer. I hope one day I'll get this good. Wow..nice.
BlueDannyLew 2006-04-18 . chapter 1
Wow. This was really cool! Kinda creepy to read about a man who loves fire so much. I really wanted to know why he was burning the person, even tho he seemed more determined to forget why he was burning a body in the first place. This to be the first story I have ever read from the Pyro maniac's point of view.
braindead1345 2006-04-17 . chapter 1
Yes! Fire is awesome!I like this, exspecaly the fact that he seems andthinks like a normal man, until you find out hes burning a body. Awesome!
Drew 2006-04-16 . chapter 1
Cool story! I really liked the way that the fire was like god to the narrator. "The fire had given, and the fire had taken away." I know you said it was unintentional, but it was still a really cool way to deepen the character's almost religious love of fire. One thing that bugged me was this line... "The fire hissed as I threw the last of the gasoline onto it." Something about it seemed incorrect or something. butm other than that, i liked it. you should write sequels or something, or continue the story. I'd like to know more about the character.
Atephobic 2006-01-12 . chapter 1
o.O I love it. I love how enigmatic it is..It's so short too, it leaves so much left to be wondered about, I think it's great. In response to your comment on 'Bring Forth The Body', It will be a song soon, there's a link to my Myspace page with some of my music on it on the top part of my page on here. BFTB hasn't been recorded yet, but the three songs on the page are all stuff that I have the lyrics for on here.
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