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Reviews For: Forgive and forget you

FunkyFlower17
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abusethis is great! every line is filled with feeling and altogether, it's a beautiful piece. a bit long, but then again, that doesnt stop any1 if the poem's good. lol. i just luv that ohrase now 'forgive and forget you'. lol. great job as always,

~mez~
Moondog Dozier
2006-01-06
ch 1,
abuseVery introspective look at the theme. The repetition of the line, "Don't cover yourself with lies-I never cover my eyes-When I cry", is wonderfully telling, it sparks to the depth of the emotion.
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