I got your review, and thought I'd read some of your work. This is really good! I can tell a lot of thought went into this. I'm going to go read your other stuff now...

Quite good. I like the feeling of this piece...it reminds me of a forgotten summer, for some reason. I especially love the ending image, dancing and blowing kisses to the birds. You've captured nostalgia / regret / beauty in a bottle. Excellent job.

Did you get the title from the Green Day song, "She"?

Nice work ;-)

its beautifully written, views feelings and opinions shown of herself with no one else to judge her, it shows alot and was powerfull to read. . .

Triumphant. This is real writing.