it's touchy
i love it

you should mention this is the parting exchange. they both seem so similar.

how evil & ruthlessly honest. i may love you.

I like this poem. It is what I pretend to be.

Awesome. So in depth, great job!

heh...I luv this poem it so...(searching for word)...eVEL (not evil) eVEL...

Oh. This is actually kind of funny to me because me and a few of my friends have this joke that I own their souls, and I don't have one. One of them gave me a Jif jar and labeled it with their name. I guess it's supposed to be their soul. Haha.

Ilovedit.

the innocence of a child is rampent in this. it is contagious in every aspect, cute and angsty and haunting(ly perfect). i love it. i love it.

+ fav.

~* noelle

Nice! Very interasting and sort of sad.

beautiful. i love the feeling it gives off... very spiritually-wrong-ish... urgh. i can't describe it. but it's nice.

Haha, creepy in the most delightful way.

it has this 'child speaking' aura around it that just makes me smile, but the idea isn't as innocent. wonderful.