Hey, I like this story of yours. I thought the first chapter was sad especially this line, "If she breathed deep enough, she could still catch the smell of him: the barely there cologne, shampoo, and his own unique scent." I don't know why that line made me feel all sentimental, hehe, I'm weird. I like the simplistic way you're telling the story because you make it a bit realistic. By the way I like the name Grey Malice... I can't remember his last name. I noticed that you changed Grey's band name from "Atrophy" to "Trash" then back to "Atrophy" again. I already know the ending to this story base on the introduction so I'm looking forward to knowing how it happened. Good job and thanks.

when will you update?!?!

This story is excellant! The characters have are so awesome, and your plot line is as well. I loved this last chapter..i have been waiting for it! And the updates..those are excellant..13 chapters in two days..lol i love it. keep it up.

I'm very happy you updated. ^_^ Man, this is really really good. There really isn't much I can say... So until next time,

--The me-like person

Yeah, I really do like it. I guess it always helps to have more chapters typed up so u can update them when u wanna or feel like it.

FLUTES ROCK!

*sobs* Oh my God. I just read all of everything, and I just have to say, that I think that this is one of the best pieces you've written, at least so far. I know I'm sounding... (that word which I currently can't spell, but begins with cli), but this work really speaks to me. I love it. I actually cried at the end of this chapter, because I remembered the introduction. You need to write more on this, and you need to write more now. Everything about this is great, and if there is a flaw, I can't see it. Please update soon, pretty pretty please! ~Your soulful reviewer, Nam.

*sniffles* Eck-gads, that was really sad... Day-mn, now I'm going to be all sad and sniffly while I read the rest of this. *continues sniffling while changing the chapter*

more!

I started by reading your other fics. I was surprised to see that you had written this, but I really like it. The characters are "normal" but not they are so different in their own way. The story is very original. I look forward to your future updates.

This is good!! Update soon. I usually don't read stories like this one, but this one caught my eye.