|Reviews for Broken Machine|
| Beena 10/11/09 . chapter 1
That was really creative, I can't help it, the title intrigued me, you're a brilliant writer ), I've read your other poems, but I'm no poetry expert, I can't find the words to express what they meant to me.
| SpottedStar 10/9/07 . chapter 1
I thought this poem was really cool. The way you described the machines flaws and stuff.
Keep writing :)
| Luny Loona 10/8/07 . chapter 1
I like how you describe the broken machine, and how it builds up to the end.
| a silenced revolution 4/1/07 . chapter 1
I hate machines that don't work right. Cool idea to write a poem about that. Or is this a metaphor for something...? It doesn't matter, interesting work, I liked it.
| Arafax 3/19/07 . chapter 1
Interesting concept you have here. I liked it. Nice job.
Thanks for the review by the way...
| His Mercy's Waiting 2/21/07 . chapter 1
Haha, no, it wasn't weird. Poetry is weird in itself, so this wasn't any weirder than the rest. If that makes sense. :D
Anyway, keep writing!
| helpless-pretender 11/6/06 . chapter 1
first off. Thanks for all your reviews, your very kind...Okay, so i liked this it was all mysterious and idk. i just liked it.
| Charming Dice 9/22/06 . chapter 1
I like your choice of words. That's pretty cool.
| Elf's Cry 8/29/06 . chapter 1
Not just a weird poem, I think. I can feel that there is a reference, to life, maybe? "Tears away somebody else's errors...It's dead, through and though, Well at least, it's not broken anymore...Who wants to remember a broken machine..." Great metaphor, I like it.
| Kristina Suko 8/24/06 . chapter 1
haha... that made me laugh. Hit it harder... oy. It's very strange, but I like strange poems. especially if they make me smile or shudder.
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| Leaving Here 8/24/06 . chapter 1
this is kinda like a look in my mind... lol
i like it. keep writing.
| LIPSTICKFLAMINGOSROCKROLL 8/23/06 . chapter 1
that reminds me of my computer
Hit it harder
Break down the flaws
Tears away somebody else’s errors
thats my favorite part!
| Durandel 8/17/06 . chapter 1
You find inspiration in some wierd things, but hey they're good and your characters will be used so don't worry.
| Noihseret 8/10/06 . chapter 1
o... this is my favourite poem of yours I love the "broken machine" symbol. you know it means something more than what it seems, but in order to fully understand it, you have to think. I like that.
| Scarlet Black 7/27/06 . chapter 1
This was probably my favorite of your poems, I liked the style of it immensely. I thought it was strong all the way through, unlike a lot of poems.