|Reviews for Broken Machine|
| this is britt 6/9/06 . chapter 1
weird poetry isn't bad. although I really wouldn't label this as weird. different, perhaps. I am sorry I never got around to reviewing this until right now. but your poetry is unique- it has a definite flavor to it. I like the fact it had some kind of rhythm to it. plus this line It’s Not Broken Anymore- the caps, something there got to me. all right, thank you so much for everything.
| BenevolentShadow 3/7/06 . chapter 1
Odd... but I really like it. It's nice to read something like this every now and then. (Now and then tends to be alot these days) Anyway, good job.
| run rabbit run 1/5/06 . chapter 1
this kind of writing is normal for me. breaking the mold is cool. i like this. abstract art almost...
| Herminia 1/5/06 . chapter 1
Very good. The question marks made it all the more effective. Kudos!