 Elizabeth Bilberry 2007-01-21 . chapter 1I like the almost mocking tone of the last line. Your take on Mother Nature is quite intriguing.
EB |
 Morike 2006-06-28 . chapter 1I love this!! So short and simple, to the point. Unlike some other peoms I've read. |
 fairEtales 2006-03-20 . chapter 1You are an amazing writer. I LOVE it! |
 Ryan Schiff 2006-01-12 . chapter 1Romantic, as all nature is. Love the last line, as though you're having a dialogue with nature, and it is replying to you. |
 thursdays and rain 2006-01-12 . chapter 1beautiful, just beautiful ♥ |