Wow, Asmodia, that was EXCELENT. One of THE best stories I have EVER read. The detail is UNBELIVABLE! A true work or art.

It was a tad bit confusing, but whatever confusion I had quickly cleared after a few more sentances.

I hope your other works are as good as this!

Wow. I loved this story. Just how he lived and died, me I wouldn't have wanted to die like that either. Nope nothing wrong with this thanks for writing such a good story and getting my juices flowing.