Very poetic. Love the imagry, and love the idea of the human freeing it at the end.

Amazing imagery. This is a beautiful description of transformation that reads with a poetic flow and packs in more than the small word count would suggest. Well done.

such rushing movement and catastrophe in your description. "cool tremors like ice water trickled down my spine", "a pink ribbon sprouting from my rear" are excellent phrases for imagery. it's a short piece, but you work well with the words to get the violence and morphing across. the only thing, is that i would never call a wolf's, let alone a werewolf's instincts "cloudy". no way. but i know what you meant. :) a fine work.

love, c.induced.

This is graphic, descriptive and provides a remarkable view of a lycantropic transformation. I really enjoyed this work. It shows a great attention to detail, both concrete and abstract imagery. Simply stunning.