Alrigh, you've caught my attention... :-D Nice first two chapters! I enjoyed reading them and I can't wait to see where this story goes next! Update soon!
Simply put: I like it. It's nothing mind enhancing or thought catching, at least not yet anyway, but it does pull you in. Well, it pulled me in anyway. I like your main character, and the mistery man is very nice. I'm very intriguied to see where this goes and I can't wait to read more. Keep it up. Nice cliffhanger too.
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