i read the reviews for this story and realized that very many people don't seem to like you o.O anyhoo, long time no talk/see/write/what-the-hell-ever. not that any of our 'conversations' was ever very nice. but, yeah, i actually liked the fact that this made just about no sense what-so-ever because it's now a tribute to insanity =D yes, well, no need to review any of my crap, i just felt like reading stuff and i saw that you changed your pen name and whatnot. ::end random rambling::

~Winter~

Yeah at first I thought it was just pointless to reply to your comment on my page, but now that I see that all these people that hate you as well, I was going to just tell you you really don't know what you're talking about as far as I can see because this poem didn't make any sense. Thanks for your concern but I'd appriciate it if you had talent before you bash someone else about their stuff. THANKS idiot :)

wtf?! dude, this made no sense! and you call MY work **...maybe try reading a LOT of books, because that helps o_O

~Lady Saraiyu

this poem made so little sense it made my head spin. with some authors, after my head is normal again i am in awe of them. with this, i feel just contempt. while i may not be the most incredible writer out there, this has no depth. you don't need to stop and think, it;s just plain and simple. now thats not always a bad thing! plain and simple is good... sometimes. but if i were you, and i'm not evidently, because i wouldn't have written this, i would try to put more depth into my work. that way when the spinning stops at least i might feel a little bit of awe.

Uh-huh...this is a rather confusing poem that doesn't make all that much sense to me. Maybe a different approach next time might be better.
Gemma

Well... there was a meter...

but that's about it. Poems, even abstract ones, are supposed to say SOMETHING, y'know.

You don't think you have any actual skill, do you?
(In reply to the review you so eloquently bestowed upon my essay)

I am simply dying to read your next work.

Yeah this to me is nonsence and it rambles...and i really have no idea what you are talking about so yeah...
Ari

it would seem that in your desperate attemots to keep the meter you have lost the poetry of the actuall work and made it read more like prose, if one can read it at all. It is difficult to follow and dosen't make much sense at all. Perhaps in the future you should just write and not try so hard, it should be a natural and organic thing.

Hm. Random, yet appealing. I liked the format.

This felt like a really strange, disjointed dream. I don't know much about brezhnev, other than the basic facts of his office in the former USSR, and a few little things about his Ukranian roots, so a large part of this poem is lost on me. Interesting, though.

-pictographic.love

Ok, you called my "essay" about my questioning God unintelligible. Maybe you should step back and look at your own work. I'm not really trying to be rude, but this "poem" makes no sense whatsoever. I don't feel anything, no real emotion in it.

** YOU GO TO HELL YOU SOB I WILL NOT KILL MY SELF YOU ARE A ** A FAT ** WHO HAS NO LIFE YOU WILL DIE ONE DAY ALONE IN A DICH I HPE YOUR GOD FERING LITAL ** DIES AND FIRST YOUR FAMLY YOU AROGEN ** BICH GET A LIFE OUT SIDE OF YOUR ** UP LITTLE GOD WORLD THERE IS NO GOD YOU ARE A BICH ** YOU AND YOUR FAMALY

It doesn't make any sense, but I presume that was the whole point. It was sort of funny though.

I see you.