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Random-Idiocity
2006-05-25
ch 1,
abuseAwesome poem, thx for the review, it's good to see more poems from ya.. I had at one point nearly 200 poems and erased em cause they werent that great but I will continue to write, good job with this poem Keep it Up!
Chi Ame
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseIt finshed excellently. I can't have thought of a better couplet to end it with. It does feel, though, that the rhyme scheme in this one was a bit forced.
Helen William
2006-01-06
ch 1,
abuseWow! this is a beautiful poem. I must add it to my favorite Stories list.Great work

Helen R&R some of my poems let me know what you think.
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