|Reviews for The Broken Hollow|
| lightXdarkness 4/29/13 . chapter 1
I loved the intensity of the story. It was a well written read and one that I have no complaints to say. I give four thumbs up because this story really did deserve it. In a way, it was perfect. You are certainly a good writer! Awesome job with this story. :D
| Veneya 12/30/12 . chapter 1
wow - that was amazing!
i loved it!
| Shabby Unicorn 8/12/12 . chapter 1
Really good story! It was such a good idea, so well developped. I've always liked mazes... on paper! This one sounds scary.
It was a great surprire that Aedelin was in fact the king. I hope they spend the rest of ther lives together :D
| Grottollica 1/10/12 . chapter 1
I adore this. I really do. I'm such a great fan of stories about kingdoms and such, and this was so well-written and well-rounded... I absolutely adore it. It comes to a nice close, in my opinion. Very well done.
| anydayanywhere 9/29/11 . chapter 1
This story was really amazing! I really liked how you concluded the story. It left me satisfied. :D
| lost in pale blue 9/17/10 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. It's a well-crafted story with awesome detail. I didn't see the twist at all, so bravo :) And the ending is very sweet.
| saxybabe352 9/5/10 . chapter 1
HOLLY SHIT! This is the best written story I've ever read on here and I've read quite a few! You had me rivited from begining to end! I seriously respect you.
Megan R Bowen
| purplehost 7/29/10 . chapter 1
Ah, how cute. Your plot took a unique idea and executed it perfectly. just the right amount of detail, and it didn't rely on dialogue too much.
| theauthor94 7/25/10 . chapter 1
That was amazing!
And what a twist! I LOVED IT!
I say that a lot, I am sorry if it annoys you or anything...
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| DeviWan 5/14/10 . chapter 1
that was like, a work of art! I really got scared when I was reading about the part of the Broken Hollow, but I got so happy when they finally kissed! I'm in love with this story! Thank you so much! You did an amazing job!
| Weinerdog of Death and Doom 3/11/10 . chapter 1
Oh wow. That was adorable, and very well written. Properly formatted, too, which is wonderful. I liked it a lot.
| Kaerith 12/28/09 . chapter 1
This is a great story. (Yay for happy endings!) The plot's good, and I didn't expect the big twist. I also was impressed with the details; specifically, that you described the Royal Guards' armbands and the king's symbol.
| raelle 8/2/09 . chapter 1
too lazy to log in right now, but anyway- I love this story! totally predicted that aedelin would be the king, but cass being the captain? didn't see that one coming... this story makes me smile
| Anonymous 5/17/09 . chapter 1