I loved the intensity of the story. It was a well written read and one that I have no complaints to say. I give four thumbs up because this story really did deserve it. In a way, it was perfect. You are certainly a good writer! Awesome job with this story. :D

wow - that was amazing!
i loved it!

Really good story! It was such a good idea, so well developped. I've always liked mazes... on paper! This one sounds scary.
It was a great surprire that Aedelin was in fact the king. I hope they spend the rest of ther lives together :D

I adore this. I really do. I'm such a great fan of stories about kingdoms and such, and this was so well-written and well-rounded... I absolutely adore it. It comes to a nice close, in my opinion. Very well done.

This story was really amazing! I really liked how you concluded the story. It left me satisfied. :D

I really enjoyed this. It's a well-crafted story with awesome detail. I didn't see the twist at all, so bravo :) And the ending is very sweet.

HOLLY SHIT! This is the best written story I've ever read on here and I've read quite a few! You had me rivited from begining to end! I seriously respect you.

Megan R Bowen

Ah, how cute. Your plot took a unique idea and executed it perfectly. just the right amount of detail, and it didn't rely on dialogue too much.

That was amazing!

And what a twist! I LOVED IT!

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that was like, a work of art! I really got scared when I was reading about the part of the Broken Hollow, but I got so happy when they finally kissed! I'm in love with this story! Thank you so much! You did an amazing job!

Oh wow. That was adorable, and very well written. Properly formatted, too, which is wonderful. I liked it a lot.

This is a great story. (Yay for happy endings!) The plot's good, and I didn't expect the big twist. I also was impressed with the details; specifically, that you described the Royal Guards' armbands and the king's symbol.

too lazy to log in right now, but anyway- I love this story! totally predicted that aedelin would be the king, but cass being the captain? didn't see that one coming... this story makes me smile

Lovely Work