too lazy to log in right now, but anyway- I love this story! totally predicted that aedelin would be the king, but cass being the captain? didn't see that one coming... this story makes me smile

Lovely Work

Truly loved it.

I love this story. You just made my day/week/month.

That was a really beautifull story. I just loved the ending. Thanks for posting this story. It was great.

Cute! Well, more darkly cheery than cute. Mostly lovely. Good job!

great read :)

oh wow.. i absolutely love this one!...mind that i LOVE AND ADORE ALL your stories!..but i always love to go back and read my favourites and still can feel the passion as i was reading it the first time!..Love you so much!..you are such a wonderful storyteller! The story just make me thing of a story in ancient Greek "The Labyrinth"...minus the Slash thingy..LOL..

Okay, to get the first thing out of the way:

*_* Shinies...

I read this once, a long time ago. Then I saw it again, and went 'oh hey, this was a good story, I should reread it.' So I did.

And GAH! The pretties make me smile until my face hurts. ^_^ They are very shiny, and I love this 'verse, and think you should totally play around in it more if the mood strikes you (hintsequelhint).

i guess they can blame it on insanity caused by the maze, right?

Lol. Epic plot twists. 'Twas sexy. :D

I read this the other day and totally forgot to comment. Too much awe at it's awesomeness. :D

This is a really unique and different story. The idea of the maze and how both men were thrown in it is really cool. It's not something I've ever read before, which is great. And the little twist at the end was really clever too.

Aw, just aw. ^^ So cute, and I love the idea of the prison. So unique this story. I've never read anything like it. And I like the fact that Aedelin turned out to be the heir. It's fitting in a way, and a total twist. Love. ^^

i like the theme. i actually wrote something on that, the limitations born from duty. its not posted on here, but i really enjoyed writing it. you did well. i liked this story. and it even has a happy ending. yay. liked the idea of the labyrinth prison too. i sure wouldnt want to get stuck there. i really havent much to say except, thx for the read, i really enjoyed it, really appreciated captain brenmarr's character too. thx.

This story was utterly lovely. It made me happy.

The idea of the maze, especially, was very interesting.

and... lots of things about this sotyr were lovely. I skipped a class to finish reading this, by the way. You should feel special.

I've actually been reading several of your stories on FP, I'm just truly terrible about reviewing. But for the record, I've quite enjoyed every story I've read, I just happened to get up the wherewithal to review this one.