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| sunshineofyourlife 2007-01-15 ch 1,   | wow. this totally coordinates with your other poem. i dig it. -Sunshine |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-24 ch 1, | there's something really intriguing in that suppressed smile...very good imagery...i thought it was really humorous at first, but something more serious does resonate behind the lines...very good job... truly yours... |
| wildwolffree17 2006-03-04 ch 1, | Hmm... I'm not quite sure why I like this so much. It's intriguing, m'dear. Well done. |
| dancingintherain 2006-02-22 ch 1, | very cute |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-02-17 ch 1, | Man, you sure know how to draw in the reviews. I was like, holy crap, I'd like to get that many reviews for something I've written. Anyways, cute poem. I myself am not a huge Shakespeare fan, just b/c it's all you ever hear. Yeah, that's why I'm a journalism major and not a literature major. (It's required to take a Shakespeare class at my college for a lit major. Yawn.) Anyways. Keep writing! :) |
| roseallie 2006-02-11 ch 1, | short but sweet, love the way its written. |
| simpleplan13 2006-01-27 ch 1, | we can all relate to this one.. great job |
| poetic abortion 2006-01-26 ch 1, | :[ my teacher hasn't even STARTED on Shakespear & it just breaks me, i really want to read Hamlet (since i adore Ophelia) but Romeo & Juliet just...bugs me. it is beautiful and classic, overdone and drone (too predictable, but haunting at once oo. it just never FULLY fancied me 'til really recently, even then i have my doubts; i found this just so..."omg!1! i luv it~! XD write mores plz. kthnx" yeah, i'm illiterate today. this is sweetly cute, sing-song in tone with a subtle: "i am about to rip my head off if we talk about this (beautiful) play ONE MORE TIME-" maybe i;'m odd. i don't know, i just felt it. i loved it, just so you know. ~* noelle |
| Pricilla Grey 2006-01-21 ch 1, | Short and sweet, I liked it. - Pricilla Grey |
| kelsi bones 2006-01-21 ch 1, | I understand what you mean about 'i think it would be better if(you and)me go away.'I had '(you and) i' because i wrote the poem so it could be read with out the brackets. I admit, your way does sound better when reading with brackets, but with out, it says 'i think it would be better if me go away.' I did want it to say me, but it didn't make sense. Thank you for you review :) Katrina |
| laughing in her sleep 2006-01-15 ch 1, | this is cute...and it leaves room for imagination |
| Skarlog 2006-01-14 ch 1, | This sounds familiar, I have no idea why >.>. ^^ |
| NurseDelilah 2006-01-12 ch 1, | for some reason I just smiled when I read. It may be short, but kudos to you for making it so pleasant |
| account not in use 2006-01-10 ch 1, | nice feeling in this. made me smile. |
| city still breathing 2006-01-10 ch 1, | I like the sing-song voice here. It's cute. I can just picture this girl smiling deviously as the teacher blathers about something irrelevant... and the slant rhyme suppressed/juliet. it's pretty.. sadistic. |