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Reviews For: Drowning in Desperate Endings
Kicking Poe 2006-01-07 . chapter 1
"Chipped hearts" is beautiful. Lovely images and feelings in all three.
disabled account 2006-01-06 . chapter 1
The other two were well-written, for haikus, but as for me I liked "Drowning Emotion" in particular; the last line, "Hands slip under tides," is such an evocative way of permuting that state of being into words. Adieu, Kat :)
Teufel66 2006-01-06 . chapter 1
Nice poems! I especially love "Desperate Days"...and yes they were very depressing.
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