this was amazing fun. i laughed so hard i cried.

OMG! HAHAHAHAHA!
So FUNY!
I rolled off my spinny-chair while reading this!!
Lee

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deliciously fantastic, babe. ^_^

that was the PERFECT blend of hotness and cute fluffy goodness and absolute hilarity! I loved every line! I just have to ask (beg?) are more Quin/ Elliot stories a possibility? because i would read/review/worship each addition ^_^

wow. wowowowowowowowow.

i have read this story like 23 times now (i don't know why it took me this long to review), and just, wow.

ITS SO GOOD!

its the perfect combination of amazingly hot smut and cute gay boys in love and utter hilarity.

and this:
"-And by fruit, I mean apples. Not Quinn, though looking at him makes me smile too."
is one of the best lines i've ever read.

i just LOVE IT!

Yeah.

My cousin Shawn would thank you for this but... He's getting laid right now.

So my cousins/aunts/uncles/other relatives are coming over for Thanksgiving.

And my friend has me read this story.

Now, my gay cousin Shawn is sitting on my lap, and he reads it. Then starts moaning and laughing at the same time.
Shawn's boyfriend comes around, wondering what's going on. Jake reads it, then pulls Shawn into the guest room.

You got my cousin laid. Go you.

But yeah, I thought this was hilarious. xD
Keep on writing.

I laughed all through this, it was perfect! I love the way these two talked with each other, exchanging all those little quips... But now I can't look at Kitty the same way ever again... "What does this have to do with Kitty?" you ask? Her boyfriend's name is Quinn.

that was so ** hilarious!

AMAZING hilarity! I was a theatre geek in high school and nothing that interesting ever happened to me or any of the kids I knew! So many of your one liners...priceless! Nowhere near your normal "two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl" angst-ridden love affair, but I must say that I really loved this. Keep on truckin with your stories!

i really like this . good job keep writing.**walking

That was so unbelievably hot! *forces self to pull hands out of pants*

I about died when that light when on. I had a feeling that something like that was going to happen the moment the set up was mentioned.

Gah! So good! *hugs*

That was ... so hot!

'This is Quinn Sanders, blow-job extraordinaire and 'This is Elliott Thomas, packing it'. --that was just pure genius! There were about ten more quotes from this one-shot that made my day. I loved it!

I don't know what you mean by a place being theatrical, because the word usually mean something along the lines of sentimentally dramatical, exaggerated, it's rather used to describe actions rather than places o.OI like the way you've started the story, though I don't really know why XDNaming the dick part was LOLI've gotta give you credit for actually having a plot in a oneshot that consists of pure SMEXOMG the the NO o.o; *hides*LOOL XD you perv *love*

Oh my god- this is just... ** hilarious. I've never been good at giving criticism, so I really have no idea what to say in that area.

I just loved every bit of it.

(I can't look at that fruit without grinning like an idiot. -And by fruit, I mean apples. Not Quinn, though looking at him makes me smile too.) I love that line so so much. I want to steal it and make it my slave.

(I always catch you when you try and watch me in the shower; you're really not as subtle as you think you are.) Hehe... I love peeking toms. They're so funny and peeky and now I have the urge to write a story about a peeking tom named Tom. I swear, I think of at least five new story ideas a day- how people possibly get writer's block is beyond me.

(silhouette of Quinn and I, with my ** down his throat) God, you are a genius. Just that one part gave me the weirdest mental image and I just couldn't stop laughing for the life of me.

Oh holy **- my dad just walked in on me reviewing this. If he saw what I've been reading... let's just say that, whenever he asks what I'm doing, I always say "looking at **", and he'd hate to find that it's the truth. Not that you write **... but it's smut. Really funny and quirky smut. That I really like.

Huzzah for ** in supply clostets! I gotta go to some stupid ** cook-out type thingy now, so 'see ya later'!