Insanity is so fun to write and this work portrayed it so wonderfully! Ah. It was a refreshing read.

You have a talent, you know that? I'm not just saying that. Honestly. There is much talent here. To bring in Death in the way you did was wonderfully done. It was tasteful and remorseful; it was beautiful.

interesting. i like the way you descibe the girl's insanity in the begining. i am wondering where that went. you were using a bunch of delicious desciptions that just cried out to me 'Insanity! Insanity!' (pure accident that it rhymed) and i was sure that the girl was going to kill herself, but her madness vanished without a trace and she appeared sane. So what happened to the madness? the insanity? i like crazy people. they're fun to play around with.

Shadowhound

p.s.the last sentence is mostly false.