wow thats good i cant remember what it is but this reminds me of somthing

O I like. The repition worked really well (at the begining and end). Bravo. Lines I liked:

"The tale of your life./On their whim/Are we born,/Do we die." Wow. Sort of scary to think about...

"Three sisters of fate-/Your life in their hands." Very pretty. I love it.

Great poem. *clap clap clap*